(15.11.2020, 23:04)Pegasus Music napisał(a): Hey MarcinHello Thank you very much for your opinions, regardless of criticism or praise. I would like a little detail to explain my mistakes to me. He writes that they are easy to fix. It would be easy if these were issues of mastering (correction of some frequencies) but you write about the piano part that it ruins everything. Throwing them out would change the track a lot and I have no chance to release it in some labels so I won't change the track structure I would like to ask in more detail about the bass that does not correspond to the sounds. It is made of the bottom melodic line of the main Melo so it is definitely on the same chords. The sub bass is similarly cut out. What else would you add to the intro? Thanks for the opinion
Not bad, but you have still a lot to learn, first the bass there are notes that are not in tune you should check them, the intro is good but not good enough still missing some elements, I love the percussion and the atmo but that piano it's just ruining everything, the vocal is cool and it is mixed well, nice lead/pluck. Overall a good production with some small errors that can be easily fixed
Cheers,
Mike
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